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jdrattops
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« Reply #15 on: June 15, 2022, 04:46:18 PM »

Good job, but I believe Zac scrambled and made the shovel pass to Oliveria.
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Donny C
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« Reply #16 on: June 15, 2022, 10:53:47 PM »

Very Good!
As the article moved toward the middle, you seemed to get very comfortable and the story became more compelling.  The last paragraph raising questions about the next game was bang -on.

Just a comment, about a couple of the opening paragraphs......Were there a couple of "run - on" sentences?  I had to stop and re-read.  Just my opinion, and that coming from a butcher of grammar, spelling  and "run-on" sentences!!!


Congrats!  Keep up the good work!


Thanks for reading and for the insights! Much appreciated!
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« Reply #17 on: June 15, 2022, 10:54:28 PM »

Great work Don! Proud of you buddy. It's always tough to put yourself out there. To me though, you are a great voice of the fans, both literally and literarily LOL. Zach

Thanks, buddy! Love the last part of your post!
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« Reply #18 on: June 15, 2022, 10:55:19 PM »

Good job, but I believe Zac scrambled and made the shovel pass to Oliveria.

I'll have to find a chance and go back and check it out to edit. (Thanks for the heads up!)
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« Reply #19 on: June 15, 2022, 11:54:53 PM »

Newest article here: https://cflnewshub.com/cfl-news/winnipeg-blue-bombers/winnipeg-must-improve-for-a-week-2-win-statistical-breakdown/
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« Reply #20 on: June 17, 2022, 01:52:17 PM »

Winnipeg Blue Bombers At Ottawa: Week 2 Preview/Prediction

https://cflnewshub.com/cfl-news/winnipeg-blue-bombers-at-ottawa-week-2-preview-prediction/
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« Reply #21 on: June 17, 2022, 05:13:11 PM »

Very good Dani! Feel free to ask me my 3 keys to the game in the future.
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« Reply #22 on: June 17, 2022, 07:43:11 PM »

Very good Dani! Feel free to ask me my 3 keys to the game in the future.

For sure! What's your Twitter handle?
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« Reply #23 on: June 20, 2022, 06:20:01 PM »

Here's my newest article: https://cflnewshub.com/cfl-news/balls-jocks-who-stuck-out-for-all-the-right-wrong-reasons-week-2-bombers-at-ottawa/
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« Reply #24 on: June 23, 2022, 02:27:18 PM »

Newest article here: https://cflnewshub.com/cfl-news/hamilton-tiger-cats/mmmbops-kick-talks-tic-talks-bombers-midweek-check-in-week-3/
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« Reply #25 on: June 27, 2022, 01:58:25 AM »

https://cflnewshub.com/cfl-news/explosive-skies-explosive-defence-bombers-vs-ti-cats-week-3-recap/
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« Reply #26 on: June 27, 2022, 02:24:15 AM »

breath taking!
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« Reply #27 on: June 27, 2022, 02:31:19 AM »

Fun read Donny, well done !
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« Reply #28 on: June 28, 2022, 03:32:47 PM »

breath taking!

Thanks for the compliment!
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« Reply #29 on: June 28, 2022, 03:33:11 PM »

Fun read Donny, well done !

Thanks buddy!
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