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Started by Donny C, June 13, 2022, 06:51:06 PM

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jdrattops

Good job, but I believe Zac scrambled and made the shovel pass to Oliveria.

Donny C

Quote from: DM83 on June 15, 2022, 04:45:51 PM
Very Good!
As the article moved toward the middle, you seemed to get very comfortable and the story became more compelling.  The last paragraph raising questions about the next game was bang -on.

Just a comment, about a couple of the opening paragraphs......Were there a couple of "run - on" sentences?  I had to stop and re-read.  Just my opinion, and that coming from a butcher of grammar, spelling  and "run-on" sentences!!!


Congrats!  Keep up the good work!


Thanks for reading and for the insights! Much appreciated!

Donny C

Quote from: Zach Schnitzer on June 15, 2022, 05:32:22 PM
Great work Don! Proud of you buddy. It's always tough to put yourself out there. To me though, you are a great voice of the fans, both literally and literarily LOL. Zach

Thanks, buddy! Love the last part of your post!

Donny C

Quote from: jdrattops on June 15, 2022, 05:46:18 PM
Good job, but I believe Zac scrambled and made the shovel pass to Oliveria.

I'll have to find a chance and go back and check it out to edit. (Thanks for the heads up!)



GOLDMEMBER

Very good Dani! Feel free to ask me my 3 keys to the game in the future.
I LOSHT MY MEMBER IN AN UNFORTUNATE SHMELTING ACCSHIDENT!

Donny C

Quote from: GOLDMEMBER on June 17, 2022, 06:13:11 PM
Very good Dani! Feel free to ask me my 3 keys to the game in the future.

For sure! What's your Twitter handle?





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GO BLUE BOMBERS GO !
COOL BEANS !

Donny C


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